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please stop writing run-on sentences
i am running out of breath i like to pause once in awhile so i can fully understand what you are trying to say so please add a period comma, and or but or use a complex connector once in awhile.
My old friend Thurston from New Zealand moved last month and he wants to stay in touch via his new email so he can tell me about his new house which has a pool and an indoor tennis court it is huge.
My old friend, Thurston, moved to New Zealand last month. He wants to stay in touch so he gave me his new email address. He has moved into a new house with a pool and an indoor tennis court. The house is huge!
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